Update README (#9351)

Needed a new description

README.md

@@ -7,7 +7,6 @@
 </p>
 
 <h2 align="center" >The #1 Open-Source CRM </h3>
-<p align="center">Tailored to your unique business needs</p>
 
 <p align="center"><a href="https://twenty.com">🌐 Website</a> · <a href="https://twenty.com/developers">📚 Documentation</a> ·  <a href="https://discord.gg/cx5n4Jzs57"><img src="./packages/twenty-website/public/images/readme/discord-icon.svg" width="12" height="12"/> Discord</a> · <a href="https://www.figma.com/file/xt8O9mFeLl46C5InWwoMrN/Twenty"><img src="./packages/twenty-website/public/images/readme/figma-icon.png"  width="12" height="12"/>  Figma</a><p>
 <br />
@@ -22,11 +21,6 @@
     </picture>
   </a>
 </p>
-<br>
-
-We’ve spent thousands of hours grappling with traditional CRMs like Pipedrive and Salesforce to align them with our business needs, only to end up frustrated — customizations are complex and the closed ecosystems of these platforms can feel restrictive.
-
-We felt the need for a CRM platform that empowers rather than constrains. We believe the next great CRM will come from the open-source community. We’ve packed Twenty with powerful features to give you full control and help you run your business efficiently. 
 
 <br>
 
@@ -49,25 +43,24 @@ See also:
 🚀 [Self-hosting](https://twenty.com/developers/section/self-hosting)  
 🖥️ [Local Setup](https://twenty.com/developers/local-setup)  
 
-# Why Choose Twenty?
-We understand that the CRM landscape is vast. So why should you choose us?
+# Does the world need another CRM?
 
-⛓️ **Full control, Full Freedom:** Contribute, self-host, fork. Break free from vendor lock-in and join us in shaping the open future of CRM.
+We built Twenty for three reasons:
 
-📊 **Data, Your Way:** The days when the role of CRM platforms was to shift manual data entries to a database are over. Now, the data is already there. CRM 2.0 should be built around your data, allowing you to access and visualize any existing sources, not forcing you to retrofit your data into predefined objects on a remote cloud.
+**CRMs are too expensive, and users are trapped.** Companies use locked-in customer data to hike prices. It shouldn't be that way.
 
-🎨 **Effortlessly Intuitive:** We set out to create something that we ourselves would always enjoy using. The main application draws inspiration from Notion, a tool known for its user-friendly interface and customization capabilities.
-<br>
+**A fresh start is required to build a better experience.** We can learn from past mistakes and craft a cohesive experience inspired by new UX patterns from tools like Notion, Airtable or Linear.
 
+**We believe in Open-source and community.** Hundreds of developers are already building Twenty together. Once we have plugin capabilities, a whole ecosystem will grow around it.
 
 <br>
 
 # What You Can Do With Twenty
-We're currently in the development phase of Twenty's alpha version.  
+We're currently developing Twenty's beta version.  
 
 Please feel free to flag any specific needs you have by creating an issue.   
 
-Below are some features we have implemented to date:
+Below are a few features we have implemented to date:
 
 + [Add, filter, sort, edit, and track customers](#add-filter-sort-edit-and-track-customers)
 + [Create one or several opportunities for each company](#create-one-or-several-opportunities-for-each-company)
@@ -156,24 +149,25 @@ Below are some features we have implemented to date:
     </picture>
 </p>
 
-<br>
-
-# What's In Store
 
-Here’s what you can look forward to:
-
-⏳ **Frequent updates:** We’re shipping fast! Expect regular updates and new features that enhance your experience.
+<br>
 
-🔗 **Extensibility:** We’re putting the power in your hands. Soon, you’ll have the tools to extend and customize Twenty with plugins and more.
+# Stack
+- [TypeScript](https://www.typescriptlang.org/)
+- [Nx](https://nx.dev/)
+- [NestJS](https://nestjs.com/), with [BullMQ](https://bullmq.io/), [PostgreSQL](https://www.postgresql.org/), [Redis](https://redis.io/)
+- [React](https://reactjs.org/), with [Recoil](https://recoiljs.org/) and [Emotion](https://emotion.sh/)
+- [Greptile](https://greptile.com) for code reviews.
 
-<br>
 
 # Join the Community
 
 - Star the repo
-- Join [discussions](https://github.com/twentyhq/twenty/discussions) and track [issues](https://github.com/twentyhq/twenty/issues) 
+- Subscribe to releases (watch -> custom -> releases)
 - Follow us on [Twitter](https://twitter.com/twentycrm) or [LinkedIn](https://www.linkedin.com/company/twenty/) 
 - Join our [Discord](https://discord.gg/cx5n4Jzs57)
 - [Contributions](https://github.com/twentyhq/twenty/contribute) are, of course, most welcome! 
 
 
+
+