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@@ -32,7 +32,10 @@ price was often prohibitive.
 
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 One fact that made Gold costly was its use by pricey jewellery which indicated
-that the woman who wore them was both rich, and physically strong.
+that the woman who wore them was both rich, and physically strong. However,
+even the strongest women reported that they were inconvenienced by wearing the
+heavier jewels. Moreover, their cost was no longer prohibitive enough to
+indicate wealth, yet high enough to indicate being frivolous.
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