revise/add markup to hedamsel-in-distress

lib/screenplay-xml/tt2-txt/He-Damsel-in-Distress-and-a-Distressing-Damsel.screenplay-text.txt.tt2

@@ -124,11 +124,11 @@ Video conference session only with Shlomi and Sam the Eagle ; without Tiffany Al
 
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-Shlomi Fish: Sam, you know? I used to look down on you given your obsession
-with trying to keep high standards of "morality" and "decency" in your roles
-within the "Muppets" universes. But I admit the "Foundation For Fantastecha™n
-Functional Fidelity" just did a commendable service to our universe's (and
-others'?) fairies.
+Shlomi Fish: you know, Mr. Eagle? I used to look down on you, given your
+obsession with trying to keep high standards of "morality" and "decency" in
+your roles within the "Muppets" universes. But I admit the "Foundation For
+Fantastecha™n Functional Fidelity" just did a commendable service to our
+universe's (and others'?) fairies.
 
 Sam: why, thank you, Mr. Fish.
 
@@ -177,9 +177,11 @@ network resources where one can hopefully find more-experienced specialists.
 <s id="shlomif-love-life-prospects" title="Shlomi Fish’s Love Life plans/prospects">
 
 [% IF 0 %]
-Shlomi Fish: now, I am no longer a vampire (at least not in this fic) and my latest major celebrity attraction (= Tiffany; Alvord) has fallen out of love me, and is going to be in hospital.
+
+Shlomi Fish: now, I am no longer a vampire (at least not in this fic) and my latest major celebrity attraction (= Tiffany; Alvord) has fallen out of loving me, and is going to be hospitalised, for a while.
 
 Shlomi Fish: as a vampire, I was destined to remain almost entirely chaste until getting slain. This is given the alternative would be me 3rd basing and 4th basing, which could scar me for life. However, many of my fictional writings were very sexualised, and I felt guilty for remaining a "virgin".
+
 [% END %]
 
 Shlomi Fish: it is still fairly hypothetical, but I think that the best way