10 Ways Neo Can Help Platform Teams Today

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Pull Request Review

This blog post has strong technical content with concrete use cases, but needs completion before it's ready to publish.

Critical Issues

Incomplete content (Lines 36, 52, 60, 95, 103, 111, 119)

• 7 sections contain TODO comments for missing screenshots or code examples
• Sections 2, 4, 5, 7, 8, 9, and 10 are missing visual examples or code snippets
• These TODO comments must be resolved before publication

Title mismatch (Line 2)

• PR title: "10 Ways Neo Can Help Platform Teams Today"
• Blog post title: "10 Things You Can Do With Pulumi Neo"
• These should be consistent. The PR title is more specific and effective.

Style & Writing Issues

Heading capitalization (Lines 22, 30, 38, 46, 54, 62, 89, 97, 105, 113)

• All H2 headings use Title Case but should use Sentence case per STYLE-GUIDE.md line 29
• Examples: "Automatically Remediate AWS Config Violations" should be "Automatically remediate AWS Config violations"

Idiom error (Line 18)

• "driver seat" should be "driver's seat" (possessive form)

Avoid vague qualifiers (Line 16)

• "creative ways" is vague; consider "practical ways" or be more specific

Paragraph length (Lines 24-26, 32-34, etc.)

• Several paragraphs exceed the recommended 3-4 sentence maximum
• Consider breaking into shorter, more scannable paragraphs

Generic phrasing (Line 34)

• "Security teams love this one" feels clickbait-y and informal for technical content
• Suggest removing or rephrasing

Inconsistent quotation style

• Most Neo prompts use italics with quotes, but Line 117 uses regular quotes
• Choose one style and use consistently

Minor Issues

Date accuracy (Line 3, 16)

• Date is set to 2025-10-01 (future date)
• Line 16 references "two weeks ago" - verify this timing is accurate for actual publication date

Verified Items

• Break comment is correctly placed after first paragraph
• Author file and image exist
• Images are PNG format with appropriate dimensions
• File ends with newline
• Internal links are valid

Strengths

• Clear structure with 10 concrete use cases
• Good use of specific examples
• Includes actual code example in section 6
• Strong opening and closing sections
• Appropriate tags and metadata

Recommendations

1. Complete all TODO sections with screenshots or code examples
2. Align PR title with blog post title
3. Convert all H2 headings to sentence case
4. Break longer paragraphs into 3-4 sentence chunks
5. Remove informal language
6. Standardize quotation style
7. Fix "driver seat" → "driver's seat"
8. Verify publication date accuracy

The post has good bones but needs these issues resolved before publication.

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