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diff --git a/source/diagrams/diagrams.txt b/source/diagrams/diagrams.txt
@@ -20,10 +20,10 @@ When you finish :ref:`creating a migration project
 based on your project's mapping rules. There are two views:
 
 - The :guilabel:`Relational` view represents the tables in your relational
-  database. It only updates if you change your project's data model.
+  database. This view updates if you change your project's data model.
 
 - The :guilabel:`MongoDB` view represents the collections in your MongoDB
-  database. It updates any time you :ref:`change your project's mapping rules <mapping-rules-edit>`.
+  database. This view updates if you :ref:`change your project's mapping rules <mapping-rules-edit>`.
 
 You can also use `Hackolade <https://hackolade.com/>`__ to visualize your schemas.
 

diff --git a/source/diagrams/manage-diagrams.txt b/source/diagrams/manage-diagrams.txt
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ Manage Diagrams
    :depth: 1
    :class: singlecol
 
-You can create new entity-relationship diagrams from the :guilabel:`Mapping` screen, or clone, rename, or delete existing ones.
+You can create new entity-relationship diagrams from the :guilabel:`Mapping` screen, or clone, rename, or delete existing diagrams.
 
 Get Started
 -----------

diff --git a/source/includes/fact-relational-migrator-intro.rst b/source/includes/fact-relational-migrator-intro.rst
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ relational database to MongoDB. With Relational Migrator, you can:
   Use the Schema Visualizer to define a new MongoDB schema for your data, or
   start with a recommended one and customize it to suit your needs.
 
-- **Seamlessly migrate to MongoDB** 
+- **Easily migrate to MongoDB** 
 
   Migrate data from popular relational databases like Oracle, SQL Server,
   MySQL, PostgreSQL, :ref:`and others <supported-databases>` to MongoDB Atlas 

diff --git a/source/index.txt b/source/index.txt
@@ -33,9 +33,9 @@ Migrate Your Relational Workloads to MongoDB
          .. step:: Design Your New Schema
 
             Use the :ref:`Schema Visualizer's <rm-diagrams>`
-            entity-relationship diagrams to build your new schema from scratch,
-            or start with a recommended one and customize it. :ref:`Define new
-            fields <rm-calculated-fields>`, split or merge table data, or
+            entity-relationship diagrams to define a new schema,
+            or start with a recommended schema and customize it. :ref:`Define
+            new fields <rm-calculated-fields>`, split or merge table data, or
             denormalize foreign key relationships as :ref:`embedded documents
             <rm-embedded-documents>` and :ref:`arrays <rm-embedded-array>`.
 
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ Migrate Your Relational Workloads to MongoDB
 
          .. step:: Migrate From Your Relational Database
 
-            Migrate data from popular relational databases like Oracle, SQL
+            Migrate data from relational databases like Oracle, SQL
             Server, MySQL, PostgreSQL, :ref:`and others <supported-databases>`
             to MongoDB Atlas or a self-managed deployment.
 
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ Migrate Your Relational Workloads to MongoDB
 
          .. step:: Select a Language and Framework
 
-            Choose from popular languages such as C#, Java, and JavaScript.
+            Choose from languages like C#, Java, and JavaScript.
             Code generation templates support JSON output and common
             application frameworks like Spring Data, Node, Mongoose, and
             :ref:`more <rm-code-generation-templates>`.