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diff --git a/src/components/Footer.tsx b/src/components/Footer.tsx
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ export const Footer : React.FC<FooterProps>  = () => {
             <h2 className="linksHeading_xaI4">Resources</h2>
             <div className="linkItem_uyV6">
               <a href="https://marlowe.iohk.io/" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">Official Website</a></div>
-            <div className="linkItem_uyV6"><a href="https://cardano.org/" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">Documentation</a></div>
+            <div className="linkItem_uyV6"><a href="https://docs.marlowe.iohk.io/" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">Documentation</a></div>
             <div className="linkItem_uyV6"><a href="https://play.marlowe.iohk.io/" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">Playground</a></div>
             <div className="linkItem_uyV6">
               <a href="https://marlowe.iohk.io/blog" 

diff --git a/src/components/vesting/About.tsx b/src/components/vesting/About.tsx
@@ -98,14 +98,13 @@ const About: React.FC<AboutProps> = ({setAndShowToast}) => {
         </div>  
       <div style={{fontFamily:"inter"}}>
         <h3>Overview</h3>
-        <p>This Prototype is a Cardano/Marlowe DApp allowing you to create <b>₳ Token Plans</b> over Cardano. 
-           <b>₳ Token Plans</b> are created by a "<b>Token Provider</b>". The Provider will deposit a given ₳ amount with a time-based scheme 
+        <p>This Prototype is a Cardano/Marlowe DApp allowing you to create <b>₳ Token Plans</b> over Cardano. <b>₳ Token Plans</b> are created by a "<b>Token Provider</b>". The Provider will deposit a given ₳ amount with a time-based scheme 
            defining how to release these ₳ over time to a "<b>Claimer</b>". In the context of this prototype, we have combined these 2 
-           participants' views to simplify the use case demonstration (see menu above...).</p>
+           participants' views to simplify the use case demonstration (see menu above).</p>
 
-        <p>The intent here is not to provide you services over Cardano, but to demonstrate Marlowe Technology Capabalities with a concrete 
-           and fully open source use case. We vividly recommend you to look behind the scenes of this deployed instance : 
-           (see )</p>
+        <p>The intent here is not to provide services to you over Cardano, but to demonstrate Marlowe technology capabilities with a concrete 
+           and fully open-source use case. We highly recommend that you look behind the scenes of this deployed instance. See the following resources: 
+        </p>
           <ul>
           <li> <a href="https://github.com/input-output-hk/marlowe-vesting/" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">
                 Token Plan Github Repository</a> 
@@ -119,28 +118,26 @@ const About: React.FC<AboutProps> = ({setAndShowToast}) => {
           </li>
           </ul>
         <p>This <b>Token Plan Prototype</b> is built using mainstream Web Technologies & Frameworks (Typescript & React) on top of the 
-           Marlowe Web DApp Stack :</p> 
+           Marlowe Web DApp Stack:</p> 
         <ul>
           <li> <a href="https://github.com/input-output-hk/marlowe-ts-sdk/" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">
                 Marlowe TypeScript SDK (TS-SDK)
                </a>
-               : a suite of TypeScript/JavaScript libraries for developing Web-Dapp in the Cardano Blockchain using Marlowe Technologies.
+               : a suite of TypeScript/JavaScript libraries for developing Web-DApp in the Cardano Blockchain using Marlowe Technologies.
           </li>
           <li> <a href="https://docs.marlowe.iohk.io/docs/developer-tools/runtime/marlowe-runtime" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">
                 Marlowe Runtime
-               </a> : Application backend for managing Marlowe contracts on the Cardano blockchain. It provides easy-to-use, higher-level APIs and complete backend services that enable developers to build and deploy enterprise and Web3 DApp solutions using Marlowe, but without having to assemble the “plumbing” that manually orchestrates a backend workflow for a Marlowe-based application.</li>
+               </a>: Application backend for managing Marlowe contracts on the Cardano blockchain. It provides easy-to-use, higher-level APIs and complete backend services that enable developers to build and deploy enterprise and Web3 DApp solutions using Marlowe, but without having to assemble the “plumbing” that manually orchestrates a backend workflow for a Marlowe-based application.</li>
         </ul>
         <h3>Roadmap</h3>
-        <p>The current version is a full end to end Marlowe Contract Example Integrated within a Wed Dapp. 
-        It's is a first iteration and is limited at the moment to 3 periods per Vesting Contract.</p> 
-        <p>E.g : If a Provider wants to create a Token Plan with an "Annualy" Frequency and an Amount of 30 ₳. 
-              They will only be able to create 3 periods (3 years) of 10₳ with this 1st Iteration.</p>
-        <p>The 2nd iteration will allow you create an infinite number of periods... 
-           The missing Marlowe feature to be provided at this DApp level is called <b>Long Live Running Contract</b> or <b>Contract Merkelization</b>.
-           The capabilities are already availaible in the Runtime but not fully yet available in the marlowe ts-sdk.</p>
-        <p> 
-          Enjoy and Stay tuned for our next releases !
-        </p>
+        <p>The current version is a full end-to-end Marlowe contract example integrated within a Web DApp. 
+           It is a first iteration and is limited at the moment to three periods per Vesting Contract.</p> 
+        <p>The current version is a full end-to-end Marlowe contract example integrated within a Web DApp. It 
+           is a first iteration and is limited at the moment to three periods per Vesting Contract.</p>
+        <p>The second iteration will allow you to create an infinite number of periods. The missing Marlowe 
+          feature to be provided at this DApp level is called <b>Long Live Running Contract</b> or <b>Contract 
+          Merkleization</b>. The capabilities are already available in the Runtime but not yet available in the Marlowe TS-SDK.</p>
+        <p>Enjoy and stay tuned for our next releases!</p>
 
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