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 What we've done
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-* We've resolved a number of issues with iOS and Android compatibility in CPython 3.13. Although patches for iOS and Android compatibility landed months ago, a number of changes have been landed since then which have inadvertently broken compatibility with these platforms. These issues usually indicate a subtle issue with the implementation of the feature that has been added - but diagnosing and correcting the source of the problem can often take days. There have also been some small improvements made to the iOS patches, such as an configuration option `ensuring App Store compliance for both iOS and macOS <https://github.com/python/cpython/pull/121947>`__.
+* We've resolved a number of issues with iOS and Android compatibility in CPython 3.13. Although patches for iOS and Android compatibility landed months ago, a number of changes have been landed since then which have inadvertently broken compatibility with these platforms. These issues usually indicate a subtle issue with the implementation of the feature that has been added - but diagnosing and correcting the source of the problem can often take days. There have also been some small improvements made to the iOS patches, such as a configuration option `ensuring App Store compliance for both iOS and macOS <https://github.com/python/cpython/pull/121947>`__.
 
 * We've begun the process of backporting the CPython changes for iOS compatibility to the older supported CPython releases. So far, we've completed the port to 3.12, and the 3.11 port is mostly complete; backports for 3.10 and 3.9 should be underway shortly. This includes `significant changes to the Python-Apple-support <https://github.com/beeware/Python-Apple-support/pull/191>`__ repository, switching the build of the macOS support package to be based on the official CPython download, and adding a CI test suite that can be used to simplify the process of making a new release.
 
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 * We corrected an issue that was causing `intermittent Toga CI failures on macOS <https://github.com/beeware/toga/pull/2730>`__.
 
-* We've improved Briefcase's `validation of the version of git that a user has installed <https://github.com/beeware/briefcase/pull/1915>`__.
+* We've improved Briefcase's `validation of the version of Git that a user has installed <https://github.com/beeware/briefcase/pull/1915>`__.
 
 * We've `corrected an issue with the way macOS signs apps <https://github.com/beeware/briefcase/pull/1910>`__. This was causing problems with apps that have particularly complex application layouts.