Merge pull request #688 from alphagov/alanmaddrell-patch-1

PP-11756 Update page as digital wallets are now live
alphagov · Nov 3, 2023 · 9b8b114 · 9b8b114
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diff --git a/source/apple-pay-and-google-pay.html.erb b/source/apple-pay-and-google-pay.html.erb
@@ -13,9 +13,9 @@ title: Apple Pay and Google Pay
         <h1 class="govuk-heading-l">Using Apple Pay and Google Pay</h1>
 
         <p class="govuk-body">
-          You can now take payments using
+          Your service can take payments using
           <%=
-            link_to 'Apple Pay or Google Pay',
+            link_to 'Apple Pay and Google Pay',
                     'https://docs.payments.service.gov.uk/digital_wallets/#take-a-digital-wallet-payment',
                     'data-click-events' => '',
                     'data-click-category' => 'Content',
@@ -25,10 +25,10 @@ title: Apple Pay and Google Pay
           on GOV.UK&nbsp;Pay.
         </p>
 
-        <h2 class="govuk-heading-m">How Apple Pay and Google Pay works</h2>
+        <h2 class="govuk-heading-m">How Apple Pay and Google Pay work</h2>
 
         <p class="govuk-body">Any user with Apple Pay or Google Pay enabled can make payments on your service in seconds.</p>
-        <p class="govuk-body">Because Apple Pay and Google already have users details, they don’t have to fill them in again on GOV.UK&nbsp;Pay. They simply have to:</p>
+        <p class="govuk-body">Because Apple Pay and Google already have users’ details, they do not have to fill them in again on GOV.UK&nbsp;Pay. They just have to:</p>
 
         <ul class="govuk-list govuk-list--bullet">
           <li>click pay</li>
@@ -38,45 +38,31 @@ title: Apple Pay and Google Pay
 
         <p class="govuk-body">The entire process takes users seconds.</p>
 
-        <%=
-          image_tag 'apple-pay-demo.gif',
-                    alt: 'Example of creating a payment link and how the title is used to generate the payment link website address.',
-                    class: 'content-section__image govuk-!-margin-bottom-6'
-        %>
+        <%= image_tag 'apple-pay-demo.gif', alt: 'Example of a transaction using Apple Pay on GOV.UK Pay', class: 'content-section__image govuk-!-margin-bottom-6' %>
 
-        <h2 class="govuk-heading-m">The Benefits of Apple Pay and Google Pay</h2>
+        <h2 class="govuk-heading-m">Benefits of Apple Pay and Google Pay</h2>
 
         <p class="govuk-body">Using Apple Pay or Google Pay:</p>
 
         <ul class="govuk-list govuk-list--bullet">
           <li>
-            is a more secure way to pay - your real card details are never stored or transferred and only you can authorise payment biometrically using fingerprint or facial
+            is a more secure way to pay - users’ real card details are never stored or transferred and they can authorise payment biometrically using fingerprint or facial
             recognition
           </li>
           <li>makes it quicker - the whole process takes a few seconds</li>
-          <li>makes paying easier - there are no forms to fill in as all the users information is played back from Apple Pay or Google Pay before users commit to the payment</li>
-          <li>reduces errors - users don’t have to retype any of their details, Apple or Google pass on their verified details</li>
+          <li>makes paying easier - there are no forms to fill in as the user’s information is repeated by Apple Pay or Google Pay before users commit to the payment</li>
+          <li>reduces errors - users do not have to retype any of their details</li>
         </ul>
 
         <p class="govuk-body">
-          Using Apple Pay means you don’t have to go through 3DS or 3DS2 authentication as that security is built-in. This makes it more secure for services to take payment as a
-          user can’t create a chargeback (for fraud) on a payment.
+          Using Apple Pay means you do not have to go through 3DS or 3DS2 authentication because that security is built-in. This makes it more secure for services to take payment
+          as a user cannot create a chargeback (for fraud) on a payment.
         </p>
 
-        <h2 class="govuk-heading-m">Who can use Apple Pay and Google Pay</h2>
-
-        <p class="govuk-body">GOV.UK&nbsp;Pay currently only offer Apple Pay and Google Pay with Worldpay.</p>
-        <p class="govuk-body">If you enable Google Pay in your payment settings credit and debit cards will also automatically be accepted.</p>
-
-        <h2 class="govuk-heading-m">What's next</h2>
-
-        <p class="govuk-body">In future, we intend to offer Apple Pay and Google Pay with our payment service provider, Stripe.</p>
-        <p class="govuk-body">We are also looking at including other digital wallets, for instance Samsung Pay, depending on user demand.</p>
-
-        <h2 class="govuk-heading-m">Contact Us</h2>
+        <h2 class="govuk-heading-m">Contact us</h2>
 
         <p class="govuk-body">
-          If you'd like to know more about using Apple Pay or Google Pay on GOV.UK&nbsp;Pay,
+          If you’d like to know more about using Apple Pay or Google Pay on GOV.UK&nbsp;Pay,
           <%= link_to 'contact GOV.UK&nbsp;Pay support.', 'support', class: 'govuk-link' %>
         </p>
       </div>