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draft-ietf-oauth-cross-device-security.md

@@ -755,7 +755,7 @@ Figure: User-Transferred Authorization Data Pattern Exploits
 - (F) The attacker enters the authorization data (e.g., a 6 digit authorization code) on the Consumption Device.
 - (G) The Authorization Server grants authorization and issues access and refresh tokens to the Consumption Device, which is under the attacker's control. On completion of the exploit, the attacker gains access to the user's resources.
 
-The unauthenticated channel may also be exploited in variations of the above scenario if there is no session maintained in the channel for steps C and G. In that case a user (as opposed to the attacker) initiates the flow and is then convinced using social engineering techniques into sending the authorization data (e.g., a 6 digit authorization code) to the attacker, instead of using it themselves. The authorization data may be represented as a QR code or text string (e.g., 6 digit authorization code). The attacker then start the flow and use the authorization data to obtain the privileges that would have been assigned to the user.
+The unauthenticated channel may also be exploited in variations of the above scenario if there is no session maintained in the channel for steps C and G. In that case a user (as opposed to the attacker) initiates the flow and is then convinced using social engineering techniques into sending the authorization data (e.g., a 6 digit authorization code) to the attacker, instead of using it themselves. The authorization data may be represented as a QR code or text string (e.g., 6 digit authorization code). The attacker then starts the flow and uses the authorization data to obtain the privileges that would have been assigned to the user.
 
 ## Cross-Device Session Transfer Exploits
 Attackers exploit cross-device session transfer flows by using social engineering techniques typically used in phishing attacks to convince the user to authorize the transfer of a session and then send the session transfer code or QR code to the attacker. The absence of an authenticated channel between these two devices enables the attacker to use the session transfer code on their own device to obtain access to the session and access the users data. These attacks are referred to as Cross-Device Session Phishing (CDSP) attacks.